tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7821445707832319306.post5387927452686989629..comments2023-05-30T22:32:56.869+09:00Comments on Luna students' room: The Lahti Filejimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17456177073785347711noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7821445707832319306.post-79501492089915179182009-02-12T12:02:00.000+09:002009-02-12T12:02:00.000+09:00Yoichi,I think you got the name of the book wrong?...Yoichi,<BR/><BR/>I think you got the name of the book wrong?!<BR/><BR/>Also, I would like you to stop using conjunctions to start sentences (and, but, so, because) - they should be used to join ideas together mid-sentence.<BR/><BR/>One other thing, please don`t put numbers in formal text - you should spell the word.<BR/><BR/>Otherwise, good job. See you in class. Jimjimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17456177073785347711noreply@blogger.com