I like my cousin Hiroko. She's my father's older brother's middle daughter. She is seven years older than me. I often played with her when I was a child, but we spend less time together since she got married.
She is very active ! She likes to travel. When she was young, she went to India to volunteer at Mother Theresa's House, by herself. She plays Japanese drums with her daughter until recently.
She is tall and has brown eyes.
One thing I love about her is her sociable, cheerful, and sunny personality, so she can change any atmosphere cheerfully.
She has a son and a daughter. Her son got a job this year, and her daughter will become university student from this April. So she will become active again. She's trying a challenge 100km walking now!
Your cousin Hiroko sounds like a very interesting person, and with lots of energy. Your writing is clearly organised & properly punctuated; you have used a good range of vocabulary & a variety of tenses. Great work M!
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