Monday, 23 June 2008

The Double Bass Mystary

Do you think The Double Bass Mystery is a good title?
I think that it is a good title, as double bass is a keyword in the story. I thought that it was a crime that aimed at a double bass. I have not understood who the criminal is, because the purpose was a famous picture.
I thought that it was good story.
because The double bass had returned to the penny at the end.
This story was a little difficult for me. Because there were a lot of characters.
eiji

1 comment:

jim said...

Eiji,

I find this posting a bit hard to understand, because you are starting sentences with And, Because...

Could you correct it/join sentences together better please - and spell check it too (title?)

jim