Wednesday 27 October 2010

Takuro's Guide to a Happy Life

Brainstorm ideas, order & expand
Some people don't go to bed early, which makes them exhausted. You have to finish your homework early. You have to eat fast when it is dinner-time.



Another way to improve your quality of life is to move to another house with your family, for example if your house is nota good place to live. Maybe you need a bigger house or it is too far from your friend's house or the school.

Lastly, people need to laugh a lot. You don't think life is fun. You should make fun your self. Say jokes to get laughing. Try to keep your smile. All this will help to improve your quality of life.
Posted for Takuro

1 comment:

  1. Excellent job Takuro - followed your plan. I think you realised the final writing is the easy bit - you are copying...which is when you need to be neat & tidy :)

    Topic sentences and examples = mission accomplished. Let's see what your brother can produce next week. Homework or chocolate cake?!

    Jim

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