Monday 29 June 2009

Bistrol Murder

Good Morning

7) On page 15 there is a newspaper report about the murder of Mr Robert Stevens. On page 47 there is a report about John's arrest. Write the report that is in the newspaper after Tommy logan's arrest.

Tommy Logan Arrested For Murder Of teacher, Robert Stevens.

Tommy broke the chair, and hit Mr Stevens with chair leg, after that Mr Stevens was dead. But Tommy didn't mean to kill Mr Stevens. It was an justifiable defense, because Tommy was attacked by Mr Stevens before Tommy killed Mr Stevens. Tommy is verry sorry boy. But he will get out of the prison within 5 years. After that, Tommy will have a good life.

Y. Mino

1 comment:

  1. Yoichi,

    There a re a couple of spelling mistakes (eg Title) you need to correct, as well as your habit of starting sentences with conjunctions (and, so, but etc). Please stop?

    Congratulations on the birth of your second son, by the way. You must be very proud! I think he has an unusual name.

    jim

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