Wednesday, 11 February 2009

The Lahti File

Larti File
Q6. Write chapter 15. What will happen next?
Chapter 15 Happy End
Since then, 1 year had passed. Munro was smiling to Sirpa Lappalainen, and Sirpa wore a wedding dress because today was their wedding ceremony.
Munro gave over the work of spy since the incident had finished. And now, they lived together in Finland and worked on a farm happily.
After the ceremony, they would go Japan on their honeymoon trip. And they would go to famous hot spring, for example Beppu, Kusatsu, Shirahone and so on. Of course , they would not take a sauna. Have a good honeymoon trip Munro and Sirpa and have a happy new life.
Yoichi

1 comment:

  1. Yoichi,

    I think you got the name of the book wrong?!

    Also, I would like you to stop using conjunctions to start sentences (and, but, so, because) - they should be used to join ideas together mid-sentence.

    One other thing, please don`t put numbers in formal text - you should spell the word.

    Otherwise, good job. See you in class. Jim

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